I was a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This was a place where I shared my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts.
I just love the picture you used to introduce your story. I liked the idea that you used words like I was terrified when you closed your eyes because you thought it might get closer. Good imagination use.
Hi Courtney it's Hunter from Rata class, I like this post because you have done your writing in paragraphs. This reminds me of my Port hills post. Some advice is to change the background on the second slide because at times it can be a little bit hard to read the story because of the fire. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!
I just love the picture you used to introduce your story. I liked the idea that you used words like I was terrified when you closed your eyes because you thought it might get closer. Good imagination use.
ReplyDeletethanks mrc i think i love it to
DeleteThis is a cool slide where did you find the picture.
ReplyDeleteI like it so nice wrok
ReplyDeleteI like the port hills fire
ReplyDeleteHi Courtney it's Hunter from Rata class, I like this post because you have done your writing in paragraphs. This reminds me of my Port hills post. Some advice is to change the background on the second slide because at times it can be a little bit hard to read the story because of the fire. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!
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